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Re: Happy Halloween
Happy Halloween By Angel of Death The smell of cigarette smoke caressed my nose, making me sigh. This was the heaven that I've been waiting all day to experience. Freedom. ...
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Re: The Elephant Boy {fourteen}
Hey Ky, Congrats on finishing book one and thanks for the heads up. I liked this but this new character seems kinda brave to me. The way he talked to ...
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Re: Da qualche parte nel cuore di Roma
Da qualche parte nel cuore di Roma By Angel of Death {031 Ease: Picture 1} They've all crowded around in one spot Their cameras are flashing and their artificial lights ...
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Re: Thou art Ashley...
Hey ashleylee. Welcome to YWS lol I'm like you in the shy department. I can't walk up to anyone and say hi, it just feels weird to me. ~Angel
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 2
Thanks times a trillion Bickazer! Your critique was very helpful and much appreciated. I love nitpicks because with the way I think, I would never have found any of the ...
Oct 28, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 2
If Love is not Enough By Angel of Death Chapter 2 October 3, 2007 The sky had morphed into a purple haze with orange sherbet highlights. In my peripheral vision, ...
Oct 28, 2008 - Re: Post Your NaNo Cover! Oct 27, 2008
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Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital DT
Thanks Via. My character really needs one.
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital DT
My character is a little bland especially since I just came back. Is it possible that we can add shrinks and such just to add color to the whole story. ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Cal's NaNo Doodles & Such
Cal you are too awesome. I loved all of them especially the zombies never looked this gay one. You're a genius at photobucket. I'm still trying to figure out how ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: In the Eyes of the Deceiver [Preface]
Hey Ash, Well I liked this but then again I always love your Historical stories. You have great imagery and your MC is different from what you usually write but ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough Chapter 1
Thanks for the review! Yeah I don't exactly know where that came from but I'm glad you liked it. I'll be sure to fix what you pointed out when I ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Columbia Mercy Hospital
Annelise Martin Jeremy Raynor seemed like he was annoyed he had to be with us. Lily and I followed him in silence. I looked down at my shoes, wiggling my ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: Sunshine and Rain, Angels and Writer's Block: A Journal
Here a list of other stories I'm working on: If Love is not Enough I always wanted to write one of those modern chick lit type books but with all ...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: If Love is not Enough
Thanks for the critique lucyy. I love it when people point out grammar and such. Something I'll never be good at. Yay a gold star! You are too kind. ~Angel
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